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Jak X Design - Bday Gift by KeyshaKitty Jak X Design - Bday Gift by KeyshaKitty
And so Kai spoke to Nicki on the phone and said: 'I don't know what to draw you for your birthday, asides dirty stuff.' And Nicki laughed and said it was fine. Then they talked about their (30 chapter long!) Jak 3 RPG and how it would be fun to finish it and move onto a Jak X one. To which Nicki sighed because, while Kai had a new Jak X look...Nicki did not. And it was very sad.

Anyhow, Since Nicki was talking about how she didn't have a design for Jak X yet, I figured it would be a fun idea to do it for her. I love designing stuff, and I've been clueless about what to do for her for her birthday (many people don't know it, but I was the one who designed Nicki's ottsel form too...both the very animal style and also the NDI semi anthromorphic one too). And also- Nicki's got a base to work with here, should there be stuff she wants to change

SO - few major things to add about this.
1) This is the FIRST time I've ever lengthened her hair. The thing is, Kai has lots of long, thin braids and I started to'd be CUTE if Nicki had 'em too...just fewer, much thicker, and stumpier. I'm really darn happy with the look here, though I'm interested in what Nicki's gonna think of the final result.
2) She HAS matured some since her older RP form...I still think she's gonna be the sweet, giggly, innocent thing she was in the original...just older looking, really. X3
3) Nicki likes Corset I had to give her one.
4) To prevent the same annoying question of 'uh...what does the precursor say?' her right sleeve says 'Nicki' and the left says 'ottsel'.

OMG! To my Nicki - THAT is my fave of all the papers you sent me! I've been saving it for ages for a good picture that would work with it and...I think the result was perfect! I also want to wish you an UBER happy early birthday! This is simply going up early so that I can post it off to you along with chocolate and that pic of yours I coloured a while back (Urg! I KNOW I've still yet to finish Daxxie-air-guitar!). I love you sooooo uberly much! :heart: You're precious just KNOW that Damas would flip if he saw Nicki in this! XD crits, please. This is a gift, not an 'OMG! HELP!PLZ' piece.

Meida: Mitsubishi Uni Pin inks #0.3, Tria Markers, Pro Markers, Copic (Comic) Markers, PrismaColor pencils, Hybrid Gel Pen, Printed Craft Paper.
Legal Stuff:Nicki design property of *Keysha-chan
Character of Nicki property of *Demyrie
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o0Zak0o Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2010  Hobbyist
All jak 4 fans,as of now NaughtyDog has given up the Jak series to High Impact Games and Nihilistic Software,and by the looks of things,they arn't going back.Us fans still love the jak series,and want to see more of them.They misunderstood us by letting HighImpactGames make the lost frontier.What made that game horrible was,it simply wasn't madeby NaughtyDog!If we truely want another great jak game,message me so we can come up with a great plot and sendit to them ourselves
ShAlJa-Trio Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2007
Beautiful Eyes, You have a wonderful ability with anatomy.
Naomi--chan Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2007
I love the flower in her air it's so adorable oh i rectify She is so adorable!<3!:w00t:
Moewen Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2005
Oh man, I love your Jak X character design! She looks like she had a great personality *which I'm sure she has* *favs*
GoblinQueeen Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2005
Ok, can I just say ho much I love your color choices on this one? They just really come together so well and so naturally. Very professional level work :)
ayekastar Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2005
when I first saw this I was all HIPS<3<3<3 GODS. You draw them so very sex-i-ly ;9 I just /love/ this design for Nickis! The bigbraidy's are a perfect contrast to your thinones <3 The colours are all so lovely together. I reeeaally like all the greensandpurples, and the background is just perfect <3
Adorablestuff <3
dabean Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2005  Professional Digital Artist
I'd have to say that this pic is among the most lively, in terms of volume and...erm, 3-dimensionalness? Her hair, he corset, and hips looks so plump, as if they actually curve well beyond the 2-D surface of the paper (wtf, that make sense? x_x It's a good thing, honest!). Her strut that juts her hips up a tad, very nice xD And how the left side of her upper torso curves in a bit to adjust for that beautiful catwalk! I love the chunkiness of your pics, too <3 Things are puffed up a tad (kinda like Chris Sanders' work!), everything down to the zipper *o* <3 THAT ZIPPER. N her belt buckle n leather straps n braids n GAGH *OVERLOARD*

In short, love everything about it so I'ma just shut up now xD

Sweetypie1936 Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2005   Photographer
Oh, so cute! I LOVE the flower in her hair!
1stpklosr1336 Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2005   Traditional Artist
That's really cute. I love the clothing.
mollies-ottsel Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2005
<3 it, oh by the way i recieved the jak x demo from naughty dog today and it is incredible!
Ladre Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2005  Hobbyist Digital Artist
o I love this design :heart: she very pretty ^^ :+fav:
Light-and-Dark Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2005
That's really cool. I love the jacket design. Not too fond of the color. *hates purple* But it's still really cool.
GirLikeyTacos Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2005
Oooh, those baids are cute!! :heart:
Gloriantes Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2005
AWWWWwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww wwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!

I'm sure Nicki will love it :3
xmadison Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
Whoa. o_o That is dead sexy right there...Moving on...^^;

I.ADORE.CORSETS. :heart: They're just so...CORSETTY. Oki, I'm just blabbering-bad way to start this comment...>> OOH! T3H DR34DS! They so soft looking, I just wanna reach through the computer screen just to feel 'em. I just love the eyes, they're so...GREEN, and pretty! And Nicki's lips...Cute! And I see you're doing different noses, frontal I mean.

Teehee, lookit dem boobs! -getsshot- Erm...-cough- Onto the belly... DEAR LORD IS THAT A BELLY BUTTON RING? OMG, it is! That's a hot addition. :P Whoawhoawhoa. Hips! Those be some fine hips, Kai! They fit right in wif those huge...Nevermind. XD;;

I shall end my ramblings now. Dead sexy pic, I'm sure Nicki will absolutely love it to death! (Yeh, I know I would...)
KyeTheKitsune Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2005
I LURVE the pose and outfit. you do a great job designing things. Your loving front view noses now i see. ^^^^
Demyrie Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2005
… Whenever something like this happens, I always open up a word document so I can stare ceaselessly at the picture as I type. Because it’s always JUST that good.

EEEEEEEEEEH THE SLEEVES SAY NICKI OTTSEL. >w< *FREAKS OUT.* Im sorry. That made me give a great SQUEAL of laughter and bounce around for a bit. Because it’s so TRUE and FITTING! <3 Its like… a little title! Like what you’d find on the back of a shirt but sleeve-wise! Its so us and so you!

Wai. WAI. *stares eagerly* Ohmigawds im just so excited. You’re right, I ABSOLUTELY adore this!! *takes a deep breath!*

I really, really love the braids. I REALLY do. (Its funny how I guessed your deviation from the ‘Nicki-norm’ from the start XD THE HAIRS!one!) They’re… well! At first I IMMEDIATELY thought of Torn’s MEGA-dreddies, but now I see they’re just these sweet little stumpy braids! … If I let em out I’d have a terrifying mullet, BUT NICKI HEARTS THEM. *SQUEALS* OouumiGEWDNESS. They just FIT. Give her more of a dashing look, yknow?

The highlights you did on the hair are… absolutely hair-pin thin and delicate. I LOVE them. It gives such a warmth to that redbrown color (which can be so boring ;o; ) and just… Eeeenh! *Zimnoise* All of them are perfectly placed- you have a veritable INSTINCT for those. Ane the little scritches in the braids! EEH! All of it makes it look so GOLDEN and SOFT and real! Its like…. *hand-thready-through-hair!* I SO want to feel up my alternate form’s hair XD *gropegrope* Well… in more places than hair, COS LOOKIT THOSE BEWBEHZ! @____@ *feels immediately guilty and… cant shake a strange feeling of incestuousness…*

*deep awed breath* COORRRRSSEEEETT!! Corset! Corset! FULL OF BOOBS. YEAH my birthday wish has been granted! XD I love how you didn’t just leave it like a corset. Because the little scrap of pink fabric under there is leikomgwtf, so perfect. Its like… just fitting! A little piece of regular clothing to back up the thing that’d be entirely provocative on its own!

Ohhh, daddy Damas… how we do love thee xD

The little gold accents make me go HEART. (Wtf… BELLY-PIERCING?! o_o … awwww. XD) Her expression and sweet pink lips are just so… Nicki! They’re so open and expectant and cute <3 The eyes, THE EYES. They’re so… luscious and full. You constantly throw out new eye techniques, and it inspires such awe X_X

Ohmygosh. The entire… just, placement of the colors. I don’t know whether it was on purpose or not, but I ADORE how it imitates my flower and my eyes- purple for the jacket/flower, green for the pants/leaf? OH MY GAWSH. *Geekergasm!* >w< The tailored, sharp shoulders and flippy Jacket are just PERFECT for her (s’like it’s a little too ‘big’ in style for her, but she wears it anyways!) and… well, the style looks the best on me IRL too, so HEYHEY COINCIDENCE. XP *budumCHING.*

Just… OH. JUSH ‘OH’, OKAY. The hips. My obsession and boundless affinity for hips is strangling me at the moment. Because… OH. *wants to squeeze ‘em* e.e They’re perfect. Just simple pants with a big hefty belt to draw attention to her hips. You are a MASTER of design m’love, I don’t see how I can possibly make any changes to this! Like, AT ALL! Im so enamored.

And I know its dorky, but I love, love, LOVE how I can recognize what kinds of artstuffs you’re using. Cos I know that gelpen (not the paintpen) you sent me is, like, absolutely perfect for the details you put in the eyes! (It gives such a lovely, milky white @^@) The little scribblies with it are precious and so JakX gritty! (I adore how she still has her flower in the midst of all this sharp, modern attire xD You can take Nicki out of the wasteland, but you cant take the wasteland out of Nicki!)

Um yeah. Damas would, like, die of a heart-attack. (But NEXT on our list is totally and COMPLETELY a sexy Damas JakX outfit! Because… it’s too much to resist!) But I love it so much I could BURST. *BABOOM.*

*Eyes go t3h WATERY* Oh KAI. Thank you so much. THANK YOU SO MUCH XD This was the best thing to wake up to, and now Im just gonna… MOW through all my homework, and look forward to seeing you, and make Tess-stuffs and be so entirely HAPPY while doing it all! This has just made my day. OMGZ. *flails and flibbers around, finally bouncing to cling to her sis* Happy birthday inDEED, m’love! *Keef* SOOOO… HAPEEEE >:B For once, Im glad to be turning 16 XD; This was… just the best, Thank you SO. SO. MUCH. *SQUEALS*

*instant favie. DUH.* <33333

And, um… BTW. *shifty eyes* Im, uh… looking forward to the card. Yknow. That card. Our tradition card. THE BAT CARD XD *DAIS* You must find one with birds on it! MUST! *cackles wildly* I love you so, so much Kylie, and you must know at least a fraction of how much I do- but I’ll spend the rest of my life trying to prove the rest to you <3
MiraKHall Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
I agree with Weas -- purple and brown are an excellent color combination, and with a hint of green (washed-out green like the genes). The braids are very interesting -- wonder if it will encourage Nicki to grow her hair long enough to do that hairstyle IRL, 'cause it looks so kyuut! :aww:
weaserpuff Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2005  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:heart: Corsette doings are love! <3<3 I loveeee the colors you chose for it, too. Brown and purple... I think only you could make that work wonders. :giggle:
But seriously, I'm diggin' the light teal pants and the light purples to bits. <3 XD; And her big hips! Oyieee!
Andandomfg. The way you've arranged the highlights in her hair... :faint: Are you TRYING to own me more than you already do at these thiiiingggs? X3 Eets just fantastic, andandand the little braids are kewt!!!11 Gotta love the purple flower, toos... I'm pretty sure Demz'll flip when she lays eyes on dees! <3<3 :heart:
ayamemaiden Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2005
Ooooh soft colors!
AlanaHikariChan Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2005  Hobbyist Digital Artist
^0^ Beautiful~! The flower is simply beautiful, and I love how you did the gemstone on the necklace. ^_^
Kymberli Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2005
She's so pretty :D
arko-del-oeste Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2005
Fall off, fall off, fall off, fall off....
Obsessed-with-Jak Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2005
OOOOOOOMMMMMMMMMMGGGGGGGGGG!!!! cutteness!!!! this is soooo cute!!! the hair, the colors, the outfit! omigawd omigawd migawd *THUD . fall on the floor*
chii365 Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2005
I love the colour combo!IT's so pweety and sweet..........
Lombax-Queen Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2005
i love the hair... its purtty... the outfit is cute too :D
bestemp Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2005
I love the hair ^^

this is a beautiful picture =]
usagi-blue Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2005
ow wow i love her hair and the flower in her hair and her shirt it's really lovely
Dahdtoudi Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow! I love her hair! And I totally want her shirt! :love: Great work!
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